‘In altre parole’ (‘In Other Words’) by Jhumpa Lahiri (Review)

IMG_5492As I mentioned in my warm-up post for Women in Translation Month, in addition to promoting interesting books by female writers, I also use the opportunity to do a bit of reading in foreign languages.  French and German don’t usually pose me too many problems, and while my Spanish isn’t great, I normally manage to understand most of what I’m reading.  Sometimes, though, it’s nice to challenge yourself, and in attempting to read a book in Italian, a language I’ve never really studied in great detail, I was certainly taking a leap of faith.  Which is, perhaps, quite apt, as the book I chose to read describes a female writer’s own journey into the linguistic unknown…

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Jhumpa Lahiri’s In altre parole (Ann Goldstein’s English translation, In Other Words, is available from Knopf in the US and Bloomsbury in the UK) is a slightly different book to my usual selections.  Already an award-winning writer in English, Lahiri found herself wanting a new challenge, and where most people would probably just take up pottery, she decides to take her passion for Italian to extremes.  Intrigued by the language since visiting Europe as a student and backpacker, she takes lessons, visits Italy and even attends events in her new language.

Still, while her language skills do slowly improve, she never feels as if she’s really getting inside the language, so she makes the decision (a rather big one…) to move to Rome with her family.  Once immersed in the language, she finally feels she’s making progress, eventually plucking up the courage to actually begin writing in Italian, with this book being the result.  But while she is happy with her improvement, is she just kidding herself?  Can she really become an ‘Italian’ writer, and is she losing something else in the process?

When I first heard about this book, I was torn between interest and cynicism.  As someone who dabbles (!) in languages, the story intrigued me, and (to be honest) made me a little envious too – many’s the time I’ve wanted to run off and improve my language skills, leaving my ‘normal’ life behind.  However, it was also hard to stifle a feeling of annoyance, a suspicion that this whole project was merely the arrogance of a successful writer.  There was every chance that this could be another A Year in Provence, the story of a rich, entitled family off on a fun sea change in a foreign country.  In altre parole contains a little of both of these extremes, but the more I read, the more I enjoyed a book that is, in truth, less about Lahiri’s time in Italy and more about her growth as a writer and an Italian speaker.  It consists of a series of short essays (originally published in a newspaper) plus two short stories, one integrated into the book, the other an addition at the end, showing the writer’s achievement in creating fiction in a foreign language.

From the beginning, Lahiri attempts to get to grips with her journey, searching for metaphors to explain her struggles with Italian:

Voglio attraversare un piccolo lago.  È veramente piccolo, eppure l’altra sponda mi sembra troppo distante, oltre le mie capacità.  So che il lago è molto profondo nel mezzo, e anche se so nuotare ho paura di trovarmi nell’acqua da sola, senza nessun sostegno.
p.13 (Guanda, 2015)

I want to cross a small lake.  It is truly small, yet the other side appears too far away for me, beyond my capabilities. I know that the lake is very deep in the middle, and even if I know how to swim, I am afraid of finding myself alone in the water, without any assistance.
*** (my translation)

While she returns to this idea, it’s far from the only example she uses.  Another has her comparing English and Italian to two children, each with a very different demand on her affections.  Later, she expands upon the frustration of the keen linguist, a brave soul entering a dark forest to gather words.  Sadly, with the only basket at hand being your memory, most have disappeared before you make it back home…

Part of the charm of the book comes from the writer’s description of her life as a language learner.  Lahiri talks about the various teachers she meets along the way, the notebooks in which she faithfully notes down new words and her relationship with dictionaries (including one which has served her for decades).  Eventually, she realises that these aids have become an umbilical cord which must be severed if she is to move on (a feeling many of us can empathise with).  Lahiri also goes into the way her new language has affected her way of reading:

Leggo con lentezza, con scrupolo.  Con difficoltà.  Ogni pagina sembra leggermente coperta dalla foschia.  Gli impedimenti mi stimolano.  Ogni nuova construzione sembra una meraviglia.  Ogna parola sconosciuta, un gioiello. (p.38)

I read slowly, scrupulously.  With difficulty.  Every page seems lightly covered with mist.  The obstacles excite me.  Every new construction is a wonder.  Every unknown word, a little gem. ***

A new language brings a new joy, a different way of reading (I fully concur with her views!).

However, what also pervades In altre parole is the sense of freedom in a new language, especially in her writing.  In English, Lahiri is haunted by a need to be perfect, yet in Italian this constraint disappears:

Com’è possible, quando scrivo in italiano, che mi senta sia più libera sia inchiodata, costretta?
Forse perchè in italiano ho la libertà di essere imperfetta.
(p.70)

How is it possible that, when writing in Italian, I feel both freer and more fixed, constrained?
Perhaps because in Italian I have the freedom to be imperfect. ***

She feels refreshed by this freedom to be imperfect, in a language where (for her, at least) perfection is completely unattainable (a nice touch here is a description of her struggles with Italian grammar, in particular the imperfect tense…).  Lahiri gradually discovers something fresh in her Italian writing, a new part of herself, something she dreads losing if she returns to the US and turns her back on her new home…

It’s all fascinating stuff, but let me play Devil’s Advocate for a while.  If Martin Amis or Jonathan Franzen did this, most readers would undoubtedly slate them for it, accusing them of privileged whingeing, so why should we applaud Lahiri for her busman’s holiday?  I’m not a fan of this kind of self-indulgence, and books like Susan Hill’s Howard’s End is on the Landing or Sarah Moss’ Names for the Sea tend to leave me cold.

That’s all true, yet there is one difference here.  Recently, Meytal Radzinski, the founder of Women in Translation Month, posted on the need for intersectionality, and it’s here that In altre parole raises itself above similar books.  As we learn more about Lahiri’s journey, the more we see that this is not just about English and Italian:

Chi non appartiene a nessun posto specifico non può tornare, in realtà, da nessuna parte. (p.10o)

Those who belong to no specific place cannot go back, truthfully speaking, to anywhere. ***

With a Bengali background, Lahiri has struggled in the past with her identity as a ‘native’ English speaker whose face doesn’t always fit.  She talks about her parents and their struggle to retain their roots, in contrast to their daughter who is neither completely American nor Bengali.  This identity crisis spills over into her life in Italy, with strangers complimenting her husband’s poor Italian while addressing her in English.  The drive to learn Italian can be seen as an attempt to find a new identity, one which only makes her more of an outsider than she was before.

In the first story included in the book, ‘Lo scambio’ (‘The Transformation’), Lahiri writes WITM Logoabout a woman in a strange land, travelling light, with little but her black sweater.  While trying on some clothes, she loses it, putting on a different sweater by mistake.  She complains about the loss, but later becomes aware that the sweater might be hers after all – she’s the one who has changed.  As the writer explains, the story is a metaphor for the change which has come over her because of her linguistic endeavours, showing the uncertainty she feels every day in her new life.

Overall, I enjoyed In altre parole a lot.  I’ve never tried Lahiri’s work in English, but she’s obviously an accomplished writer.  I appreciated the metaphors she uses and the way she organises and ends her pieces, and the two stories both had something about them.  This is definitely a book to recommend, especially as the English version is bilingual (something I didn’t know when I bought my edition!).  I did get a sense, though, that while I can pat myself on the back for reading a whole book in Italian (with occasional glances at Google Translate on my phone), this wasn’t the real thing.  Even I could see that the style was simple in places, with frequent repetition of structures and certain words used over and over again (Lahiri herself admits at one point to using some words as life preservers), and if I could understand it with no major issues, I wonder what a native Italian would think.

Anyone?

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#WITMonth Bonus Shot – Number 8
Welcome to the eighth of my #WITMonth Bonus Shot features, in which I suggest some further reading ideas connected to the post (and country) of the day – links, where applicable, are to my reviews🙂

If you’re looking for books by Italian women, I suppose there’s no getting past Elena Ferrante and her Neapolitan Novels, but don’t forget that she’s written other books too.  One of my favourites is the frantic The Days of Abandonment, and Troubling Love is also a great read.

Another writer I admire is Viola Di Grado.  So far she’s had two books out in English, and while her most recent work, Hollow Heart, hasn’t got a lot of attention, her first, 70% Acrylic 30% Wool, has a lot of fans.

Both of these women are published in the Anglosphere by Europa Editions – given that it’s a press owned by an Italian publishing house, it’s unsurprising that Europa have a big focus on Italy.  Other women on their books include Simonetta Agnello Hornby and Milena Agus, so if you’re a fan of Italian fiction, you could do worse than check out their site.

One book I haven’t read (but I intend to) is a novel that faded into oblivion only to be (luckily) brought back into the public’s memory.  When Jenny Erpenbeck’s The End of Days looked set to take out the final Independent Foreign Fiction Prize in 2015, most people thought that she would be the first female winner.  However, as it turned out, there had been an omission on the official website, one unnoticed for years – in fact, there had already been a female winner, Marta Morrazoni’s The Alphonse Courrier Affair (back in 2001).  Now if that isn’t a story for Women in Translation Month…

6 thoughts on “‘In altre parole’ (‘In Other Words’) by Jhumpa Lahiri (Review)

  1. I had a similar reaction when I read a review of this book a few weeks ago. It smacked of either being a “how we all had a lovely time getting to know the real Italy” book in the vein as you say of A Year in Provence or “how I discovered the real me” as per the dreadful Eat, Pray, love. Good tomorrow that it’s much better than that thiugh I did wonder how good a product her novel would be. It’s one thing learning grammar and vocabulary but do you have enough ability to convey the subtlety that good writing requires? I guess the jury is out on this for me

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    1. Karen – I certainly enjoyed it more than I thought I would, and it (thankfully) didn’t turn into an ‘Eat, Pray, Love’ moment🙂

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  2. It does sound hugely privileged and self-indulgent, and I’m not persuaded intersectionality is that great a defence to that. Lahiri’s is hardly a marginalised voice.

    Also, these writers who go for a year, they’re tourists pretending to be something more. Tim Parks by contrast actually moved to Italy, raised his kids there as Italian kids, is now a published Italian writer. He’s an emigrant, or from an Italian perspective an immigrant. The “do a year” writers are gap year kids, who to paraphrase Pulp can call their dad (or bank manager) and stop it all. There’s nothing wrong with being a tourist, I’m one often enough myself, but I don’t really want to read a book about someone else’s holidays.

    More problematically, I thought the Italian read like English. They read like English sentences to me, but using Italian words and grammar, not like natural Italian sentences. They also seemed possibly a little fussy and as you say rather simple.

    My spoken Italian is pretty good, but normally I can’t read literature in Italian. These I could read easily. I’d put the language closer to the level of Dylan Dog or Martin Mystere (both of whom I like to be fair) than Italian literary fiction.

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    1. Max – I understand where you’re coming from , but I think there are many shades between the gap-year experience and the full emigrant, and there’s enough here to make her experience interesting to more than just her family and fans (also, I’m not a huge fan of Park’s nasty sniping at other translators, but that’s another story…). Yes, she’s not the most underappreciated writer out there, but she does have an interesting story to tell, and even if she’s gone back to the States, I’ve heard she’s now translating a book from Italian, something more writers should do.

      As for the language itself, I’m sure you’re right – if I could get by fairly effortlessly with the odd word looked up in the dictionary, it must be pretty simple writing😉 Still, I did enjoy it

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      1. A shame Parks does that. I didn’t know and it’s unattractive. Oh well.

        Anyway, I don’t mean to slam a book I’ve not read and clearly you enjoyed it. Probably one I’ll pass on though. The translation thing is actually more interesting, given she’ll be bringing from the Italian into English.

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        1. Max – This is a book I enjoyed, but that’s not to say that I think it’s a great book, and there’s a definite aroma of privilege wafting around the whole project. However, for me, reading it in my woeful Italian, it was the right book at the right time (I suspect that I wouldn’t have liked it as much in English!).

          The translation idea is intriguing. It’s something great non-Anglophone writers do almost as a matter of course, and really should be part of any writer’s apprenticeship. Of course, firstly, you need to be able to understand another language, and that’s where far too many English speakers fall down…

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